Onse apona time there was a little girl who was about to go to bed and she cuddled her teddy nice and cosey.The little girl woke up and her teddy was gone so she told her mum and dad that her teddy has gone missing.The parents said”get ready for school and when your at school well look for your teddy”so they did.When the little girl was back home she said”have you found my teddy yet”mum replied “no we haven’t”the girl was sad.They were shore that it would turn up some day.It took a week to even get a tiny bit closer.Within a nother week or so the little girl saw the teddy walking on its feet so the family chased the bare until…
They had finaly captured the teddy bare and the little girl was never letting that teddy go ever again.That day the little girl was as happy as cat and it never happened again.
I loved the story it was like an emotional rollercoaster.
Watch out for them homophones.
+I liked your Title it sounded cute and AMAZING!!! I really liked your punctuation and the way how it sounds it was little bit creepy!
?Who did you make it about?What was her name?
-> Make the story longer please because i really liked the story!