Once upon time there was a boy named Jay and he was your every day boy he loved football and sport.But one day Jay went on a walking the nice calm woods were lots of people were walking at the time but Jay lost track of time and the way he was going.He heard a noise he whispered in shock nothing answered but it was just a stray cat .Jay sighed in relief he then said “I wonder how to get out of hear?” he carried on walking but it started to get cold and dark and he had no wifi so he couldn’t call any one he finally found light he walked towards it it seemed like it was a new world he stepped inside and it was later on that day he saw with his own eyes he suddenlyJay woke up and said “good gob that was a dream!”
thank you for reading my story the lost forest bye.
+really good detail and also so intresting.
?where did you get this idea from?
and where did he go?
-make shore it makes sense and also more discriptive
You need to add a full stop at the end but still that’s brilliant work so far carry on with you fab work.