one dark and stormy night in the year 1920 a new house was made in a dark ali .The dark ali started to be suny and popular and the place were every body wanted to live.but one day the street changed again in 1930 the house that was built about 10 years ago got nocked down by a recking ball! the people sadly died inside the building but the basement servive and they disisided to use it for a good thing so they used it as a sience lab. all it needed was a little dust and some sience eqipment . when the lab was finished the most CRAZY siencet in the world bought it and that CRAZY sientists name was bob hey and he obyolily loved sience intill one day he messed up he souted “HELP” he put the wrong thing in his mix ture and the basement exploded
to be continuied……….
+ I like the title of this piece and the setting. It sounds really creepy!
? Where did you get the idea from? Have you been to such a place?
-> Always remember to read through your post and check the capital letters and full stops! Your piece should have one as the first letter!!
+I liked that you had a amazing title it is really creepy.
?How did you find these amazing words.
-check you capital letters and full stops.
i love your story #you need to work on your spellings
Good job you just need to add a capitull letter at the beging of the sentens .But apart of that its brill.
Your story is great but practice your spellings it will Improve a lot of you fabulous story you make:) a good work goodbye.
The abandoned basement 2!
After the bang the professor got up limping “OUCH.”In the corner of his eye he saw a movement it was a poison gas he ran but he was stuck.To be continued.